Script: Stars in My Mind

Untitled Divine Project Script by Divineic on Scribd

After some few feedback about the script, I was able to get what I wanted from the reader/ audience. I didn't want the story to be 'just' simple since we are in a mind of memories. There are a lot of connotations that if you go deep into it you would understand/ see it clearly or differently (said by my readers and me). For example; the stars are symbols of memories which you would get at the end, Divi doesn't glitch meaning it is his mind, Alex disappears first as we don't have any contact with him whatsoever and there are more signs/ symbols. Surprisingly, the flags and the luggage's (which symbolises where they are going) were confusing for some at first but when explained/ read again it got fascinatingly clearer.

I love how they point at a direction and things come to life because when playing an imaginary game is like 'improv,' no matter what the subject is you have to figure a way to play the scenario. I also loved how there is less object in the space and more focused on the characters as it makes you connect to each characters emotion/ personality.

In conclusion, I love the story and think this is the right direction.