Hi Divine, A note on your wording - '23% of humans are made of carbon'. That sounds like 23% of the total population are made completely of carbon. 'Humans are made of 23% carbon' makes more sense... (Actually, is that figure correct?- I just looked here - https://www.livescience.com/3505-chemistry-life-human-body.html where it says 18% ?)
Hey Divine - so just to echo Jackie - just be super sure your facts are accurate. But it does look from your script as if you've got a plan and a clear flow here of information. I like the whole 'exercise book' vibe - looking at your most recent concept paintings (of the stylised water etc) I like that, but try not to over-complicate things - keep to a set of design rules that remain consistent throughout. Are we going to have spoken word too, or are we just going to read what's in the boxes? I think you may find that spoken word will help keep things from feeling too much like we're watching an animated power point. I did think of this film too as a possible inspiration in terms of embracing fully the exercise book thing:
Hi Divine,
ReplyDeleteA note on your wording - '23% of humans are made of carbon'. That sounds like 23% of the total population are made completely of carbon. 'Humans are made of 23% carbon' makes more sense... (Actually, is that figure correct?- I just looked here - https://www.livescience.com/3505-chemistry-life-human-body.html where it says 18% ?)
Hey Divine - so just to echo Jackie - just be super sure your facts are accurate. But it does look from your script as if you've got a plan and a clear flow here of information. I like the whole 'exercise book' vibe - looking at your most recent concept paintings (of the stylised water etc) I like that, but try not to over-complicate things - keep to a set of design rules that remain consistent throughout. Are we going to have spoken word too, or are we just going to read what's in the boxes? I think you may find that spoken word will help keep things from feeling too much like we're watching an animated power point. I did think of this film too as a possible inspiration in terms of embracing fully the exercise book thing:
ReplyDeletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AWwZg6rLGt4